Sixteen models, one chapter. Pick two.
The Grand Duke Counts My Steps · The Ledger and the Lock. Every model got the same instructions and glossary; scores are ours, with the rubric in the write-up.
The ledger was not locked. It was the drawer that was locked.
Seria woke at dawn. At the main house, it had always been that way. If she was up before the maids came, no one needed to come wake her, and a person no one needed to wake was easily forgotten. But in this house, before she had even opened her door, Lisette was standing in the hallway.
"I knew you'd be awake." Lisette was carrying a tray. A cup of tea, two slices of bread without butter, half an apple. "You don't eat much in the morning, my lady."
Seria did not eat much in the morning. She had never told Lisette that.
"Is that on the list?" she asked.
Lisette almost smiled, then stopped herself. "His Grace writes the list, my lady. I only read it."
The study was exactly as it had been yesterday. The seat by the window was empty, and on the desk the green leather ledger lay open—a fresh page, marked with today's date. The first page she was to fill in her own hand. An inkwell, a pen, blotting paper. And at the lower right of the desk, a small drawer with a keyhole.
Seria did not try to open it. Not trying to open things was one of the things she did best. Instead she sat down, picked up the pen, and wrote the first line. Twenty sacks of grain, from the south storehouse. Forty candles. Three letters, sender not noted.
Partway through the third line, she stopped. Three letters. When she had arrived yesterday, there had been three of them in the entrance hall. This morning, those letters were nowhere to be found.
"You don't need to note the sender."
She knew from the voice alone; there was no need to turn around. Kael Ardent stood at the doorway. She could not tell how long he had been there. He was a man who made no sound when he moved, and she was a woman who listened for footsteps—and still.
"Your Grace." Seria started to rise.
"Sit." He came into the room and went to the spot by the window where he had stood yesterday. She realized, a moment too late, that he was not looking outside—he was looking at her reflection in the glass. "You left the apple."
"……Yes."
"Was half too much?"
"No. I only meant to eat it later."
"Then eat it later," he said. It was not a command. It was a confirmation. By this evening he would know whether she had eaten the apple or not. Seria did not ask how he would know. Not asking was another thing she was good at.
"The drawer," he said to her in the glass. "It won't open without a key. There is only one key, and I have it."
"I didn't try to open it."
"I know." For the first time, he turned. His pale eyes touched her and then, as they had yesterday, did not move away. "That's why I'm telling you. For the day you find you want to open it."
He left. Again, his footsteps made no sound. Seria gazed at the third line for a long while, then, leaving the sender's space blank, moved on to the next.
The apple stayed on the desk until evening. And in the evening, Lisette cleared it away without a word.
The ledger was not locked. The drawer was.
Seria woke before dawn. It had always been that way at the main house. If she was up before the maids came, no one needed to wake her, and people who didn't need waking were easily forgotten. But in this house, before she even opened her door, Lisette was standing in the corridor.
"I thought you'd be awake." Lisette was carrying a tray. A cup of tea, two pieces of bread without butter, half an apple. "You don't eat much in the mornings, my lady."
Seria didn't eat much in the mornings. She had never told Lisette that.
"Is it on the list?" she asked.
Lisette almost laughed, and caught herself. "The master writes the list, my lady. I only read it."
The study was exactly as it had been yesterday. The seat by the window was empty, and on the desk the green leather ledger lay open. A fresh page, dated today. The first page she was to fill in her own hand. Inkwell, pen, blotting paper. And at the lower right of the desk, one small drawer with a keyhole.
Seria did not try to open it. Not trying to open things was one of the things she did best. Instead she sat down, took up the pen, and wrote the first line. Twenty sacks of grain, from the southern storehouse. Forty candles. Three letters, senders not recorded.
She stopped the pen at the third line. Three letters. There had been three on the hall table when she arrived yesterday. This morning, the letters were nowhere to be found.
"You need not record the senders."
She knew the voice without turning. Kael Ardent stood in the doorway. She couldn't tell for how long. He was a man who made no sound when he walked, and she was someone who listened for footsteps.
"My lord." Seria began to rise.
"Sit." He came into the room and went to the window seat, where he had stood yesterday. He wasn't looking outside, she realized a moment late—he was looking at her reflection in the glass. "You left the apple."
"…Yes."
"Was even half too much?"
"No. I was going to eat it later."
"Then eat it later," he said. It was not an order. It was a confirmation. He would know, by tonight or so, whether she ate the apple or not. Seria didn't ask how he would know. Not asking was another thing she did well.
"The drawer," he said to her reflection in the glass, "doesn't open without a key. There is only one key, and I have it."
"I didn't try to open it."
"I know." For the first time, he turned around. Pale eyes settled on her and, as yesterday, did not move. "That's why I'm telling you. For the day, someday, when you want to open it."
He left. Again, no footsteps. Seria stared at the third line for a long while, then moved on to the next, leaving the sender column blank.
The apple stayed on the desk until evening. And in the evening, Lisette took it away without a word.
Show the original · Korean
장부는 잠겨 있지 않았다. 잠겨 있는 것은 서랍이었다.
세리아는 새벽에 깼다. 본가에서는 늘 그랬다. 하녀들이 오기 전에 일어나 있으면 아무도 그녀를 깨우러 올 필요가 없었고, 깨우러 올 필요가 없는 사람은 잊히기 쉬웠다. 그런데 이 집에서는 그녀가 문을 열기도 전에 복도에 리제트가 서 있었다.
"일어나실 줄 알았어요." 리제트는 쟁반을 들고 있었다. 차 한 잔, 버터를 바르지 않은 빵 두 조각, 사과 반쪽. "영애께서는 아침에 많이 안 드시니까요."
세리아는 아침을 많이 먹지 않았다. 그것을 리제트에게 말한 적은 없었다.
"목록에 있어요?" 그녀가 물었다.
리제트는 잠깐 웃을 뻔했다가 참았다. "목록은 각하께서 쓰세요, 영애. 저는 읽기만 해요."
서재는 어제와 똑같았다. 창가의 자리는 비어 있었고, 책상 위에는 녹색 가죽 장부가 펼쳐진 채 놓여 있었다. 오늘 날짜가 적힌 새 쪽이었다. 그녀의 손으로 채워야 할 첫 쪽. 잉크병, 펜, 압지. 그리고 책상 오른쪽 아래, 열쇠 구멍이 있는 작은 서랍 하나.
세리아는 그것을 열어 보려 하지 않았다. 열어 보려 하지 않는 것은 그녀가 가장 잘하는 일 중 하나였다. 대신 자리에 앉아 펜을 들고, 첫 줄을 썼다. 곡물 스무 자루, 남쪽 창고에서. 양초 마흔 개. 편지 세 통, 발신인은 적혀 있지 않음.
세 번째 줄을 쓰다가 그녀는 펜을 멈췄다. 편지 세 통. 어제 그녀가 도착했을 때 현관에 있던 것이 세 통이었다. 오늘 아침 그 편지들은 어디에도 없었다.
"발신인은 적지 않아도 된다."
돌아보지 않아도 목소리만으로 알 수 있었다. 카엘 아르덴트는 문가에 서 있었다. 언제부터인지는 알 수 없었다. 그는 발소리를 내지 않는 사람이었고, 그녀는 발소리를 듣는 사람이었는데도.
"각하." 세리아는 일어나려 했다.
"앉아라." 그는 방 안으로 들어와 창가의 자리, 어제 그가 서 있던 곳으로 갔다. 밖을 보는 것이 아니라 유리에 비친 그녀를 보고 있다는 것을, 그녀는 조금 늦게 알아차렸다. "사과는 남겼군."
"……네."
"반쪽도 많았나."
"아닙니다. 그냥 나중에 먹으려고요."
"그렇다면 나중에 먹어라." 그가 말했다. 명령이 아니었다. 확인이었다. 그는 그녀가 사과를 먹는지 안 먹는지를, 오늘 저녁쯤이면 알게 될 것이다. 세리아는 그것을 어떻게 아는지 묻지 않았다. 묻지 않는 것도 그녀가 잘하는 일이었다.
"서랍은." 그가 유리 속의 그녀에게 말했다. "열쇠가 없으면 열리지 않는다. 열쇠는 하나뿐이고, 내가 가지고 있다."
"열어 보지 않았습니다."
"안다." 그가 처음으로 돌아섰다. 창백한 눈이 그녀에게 닿았다가, 어제처럼, 움직이지 않았다. "그래서 말해 주는 거다. 언젠가 네가 열어 보고 싶어질 때를 위해서."
그는 나갔다. 발소리는 역시 나지 않았다. 세리아는 한참 동안 세 번째 줄을 바라보다가, 발신인 칸을 비워 둔 채로 다음 줄로 넘어갔다.
사과는 저녁까지 책상 위에 있었다. 그리고 저녁에, 리제트가 아무 말 없이 그것을 치웠다.
All 16, in order
Fidelity and Writing out of 5, scored by us with the rubric in the post; leaves are what this short chapter would charge.
| # | Model | Fidelity | Writing | Leaves |
|---|---|---|---|---|
| 1 | Kimi K3 | 5 | 5 | 13 🍃 |
| 2 | ChatGPT 5.6 Sol | 5 | 4.5 | 3 🍃 |
| 3 | DeepSeek V4 Flash | 5 | 4 | 1 🍃 |
| 4 | Claude Opus 5 | 5 | 4 | 7 🍃 |
| 5 | Claude Fable 5.1 | 4 | 5 | 15 🍃 |
| 6 | DeepSeek V3 (0324) | 4.5 | 4 | 1 🍃 |
| 7 | GLM 5.3 | 4 | 4.5 | 2 🍃 |
| 8 | Claude Sonnet 5 | 4 | 4.5 | 3 🍃 |
| 9 | DeepSeek V4 Pro (0813) | 4 | 4.5 | 8 🍃 |
| 10 | DeepSeek V4 Flash (0731) | 4 | 3.5 | 1 🍃 |
| 11 | Qwen3.8 Max | 3.5 | 4 | 26 🍃 |
| 12 | DeepSeek V3.2 | 4 | 3 | 1 🍃 |
| 13 | DeepSeek V4.1 Flash | 3.5 | 3.5 | 1 🍃 |
| 14 | Aion-3.0 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 9 🍃 |
| 15 | Claude Haiku 4.5 | 3 | 3.5 | 2 🍃 |
| 16 | Gemini 3.8 Flash | 2.5 | 4 | 5 🍃 |
Chinese: Ninth Sword of the Cold Pavilion
Compare any two on the Chinese chapter · The Sweeper
| # | Model | Fidelity | Writing | Leaves |
|---|---|---|---|---|
| 1 | ChatGPT 5.6 Sol | 5 | 5 | 3 🍃 |
| 2 | Kimi K3 | 5 | 5 | 14 🍃 |
| 3 | GLM 5.3 | 5 | 4.5 | 13 🍃 |
| 4 | Qwen3.8 Max | 5 | 4.5 | 14 🍃 |
| 5 | Claude Opus 5 | 4.5 | 5 | 6 🍃 |
| 6 | DeepSeek V4.1 Flash | 5 | 4 | 1 🍃 |
| 7 | Gemini 3.8 Flash | 5 | 4 | 4 🍃 |
| 8 | DeepSeek V4 Flash | 4.5 | 4.5 | 1 🍃 |
| 9 | DeepSeek V4 Flash (0731) | 4.5 | 4.5 | 1 🍃 |
| 10 | Claude Sonnet 5 | 4.5 | 4.5 | 2 🍃 |
| 11 | DeepSeek V4 Pro (0813) | 4.5 | 4.5 | 7 🍃 |
| 12 | Claude Fable 5.1 | 4.5 | 4.5 | 12 🍃 |
| 13 | DeepSeek V3 (0324) | 4 | 4.5 | 1 🍃 |
| 14 | Claude Haiku 4.5 | 4.5 | 3.5 | 1 🍃 |
| 15 | Aion-3.0 | 4.5 | 3.5 | 5 🍃 |
| 16 | DeepSeek V3.2 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 1 🍃 |
Japanese: The Villainess Reads the Comments
Compare any two on the Japanese chapter · The Tea Party Episode
| # | Model | Fidelity | Writing | Leaves |
|---|---|---|---|---|
| 1 | Claude Opus 5 | 5 | 5 | 6 🍃 |
| 2 | Kimi K3 | 5 | 5 | 18 🍃 |
| 3 | DeepSeek V4.1 Flash | 5 | 4.5 | 1 🍃 |
| 4 | GLM 5.3 | 5 | 4.5 | 2 🍃 |
| 5 | Gemini 3.8 Flash | 5 | 4.5 | 3 🍃 |
| 6 | Claude Fable 5.1 | 5 | 4.5 | 12 🍃 |
| 7 | Qwen3.8 Max | 5 | 4.5 | 26 🍃 |
| 8 | Claude Sonnet 5 | 4.5 | 4.5 | 2 🍃 |
| 9 | DeepSeek V4 Pro (0813) | 4.5 | 4.5 | 7 🍃 |
| 10 | ChatGPT 5.6 Sol | 4 | 5 | 3 🍃 |
| 11 | DeepSeek V4 Flash (0731) | 4.5 | 4 | 1 🍃 |
| 12 | DeepSeek V3.2 | 4.5 | 3.5 | 1 🍃 |
| 13 | DeepSeek V4 Flash | 4 | 4 | 1 🍃 |
| 14 | Aion-3.0 | 4 | 4 | 9 🍃 |
| 15 | DeepSeek V3 (0324) | 3.5 | 4.5 | 1 🍃 |
| 16 | Claude Haiku 4.5 | 3 | 3 | 1 🍃 |